NORTHERN LIGHTS
In this video; we can clearly see the Northern Lights.They are colorful but generally green.Except for green, these lights can be seen as pink, blue, rarely purple.We can see all of these colors.
Northern Lights are seen between 60 and 72 degrees north and south latitudes.That is why this video was recorded in a place close to the polars.What is more; it was recorded the lights not only during daytime but also nights.As a result of this; we can see Northern Lights in darkness and brightness.
As we can see in the video; these kind of lights move wavy.They don't move flat.Instead they make some semi-circle movements.Sometimes they are brighter than other times.
As we can see in the video; these kind of lights move wavy.They don't move flat.Instead they make some semi-circle movements.Sometimes they are brighter than other times.
(*) That is why this video was recorded in a place close to the polars..(punctuation)
YanıtlaSil(*) What is more; it was recorded the lights not only during daytime but also nights. (sentence structure)
(*)Instead they make some semi-circle movements. (punctuation)
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